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After the first five posts in prose the log demanded something different in my favourite genre, for the sixth letter E, the last one for this week :D
Energy
Energy is you and I and the limitless sky
that flows in, around and through us
The thought-its flow-and that which thinks.
It is every feeling, every clench-unclench
Of muscle, sinew and expansive heart.
Energy is the memory of what we carry from
Pre-embryonic places.
It is the Un-self
It is the Now.
It is the One big primeval breath
the air of which circulates starting
from immemorial times
recycled from dinosaur, to fish, to primate
It is the Now.
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15 comments:
This is a very deep thought....Sunila
and the circle of energy envelops the whole universe in itself.....
source is the same objects change...
This poem was unexpected and it is brilliant :)
Stri
Another wonderful explanation here, Sunila. This line is my favourite - "The thought-its flow-and that which thinks". A helpful reminder for someone like me who likes to spend a lot of time with her thoughts :)
Thanks Shelley :)
Ya I was fed up of prose Sri tks :)
Beloo :)tks dear.in that line I aimed at separating the thought n the thinker...
Very Refreshing post!
Wow! So thought provoking....it is the past, present, everything between and NOW!
Energy is you and I and the limitless sky - Makes me think about Energy on a different note altogether from mundane notions around it...It broadens the mind in thinking more about inner energy...
Tks Paddu for the refreshing comment :)
Aditi, tks dear for reading and enjoying :)
Jayanta tks for receiving the thoughts as they were intended to be received :)
Thanks, Sunila. I loved the 'memory of what we carry'. Lovely!
Absolutely stunning poetry Sunila imparting the energy to make the reader think.
- Kripali
(AJ's wHooligans)
A2ZFiction
This is wonderful. It also reflects what I believe, that everything is energy, and energy never ceases to exist, it only changes form.
Thanks for visiting Crazy Town in Looney Land
The poem is so deep...very nice work..
Random Thoughts Naba
It is the One big primeval breath the air of which circulates starting from immemorial times recycled from dinosaur, to fish, to primate It is the Now.
This is such a simple truth... but a basic i never gave thot to! Loved it....
So you deliver the promise of a poem from you :) Thanks for that energetic poem, dear. Nicely penned !
I think you captures the essence of energy beautifully.
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